"Let the Lord of Chaos rule."
not-so-short story inspired from Sins of a Solar Empire
Published on November 27, 2008 By Fokxnim In Sins of a Solar Empire

Sinners

 

***Sinners has been discontinued. See last page for details.***

 

Sinners is currently (as of Febuary 15)...172 pages!

Part 2 HAS BEGUN! Here's the teaser for those of you who haven't seen it yet, or would like to be reminded of what's to come.

Part 2: Destruction

Teaser

 

 

Kol:

captured by the vicious Mani'k, can Kol escape from the Vasari before he himself is turned into one of the Vasari? And even if he can manage to escape, the Guild of Marksmen is out there, looking for him...

Archie:

Sent back to his home planet to solve a streak of murders committed by a close friend, will he join the murderer? Or will he pay the ultimate sacrifice?

Zeke:

Forever battling for control of his body, Zeke's psionic powers are growing stronger, and Alfr'eda is growing frightened. Can a Silent One rejoin the Unity? What would that mean for her? In the meantime, there are Sinners to purge. But her next target may be the most difficult and dangerous yet....The Prime Chancellor himself.

Jessica:

After the great Admiral Kol mysteriously disappears, Jessica steps up to pick up the empty seat of power. But others want the coveted Admiral position as well, and they will stop at nothing to get it. Does the "female Kol" have what it takes to reach Admiralty without the powers of a Marksman? Or will she just be a listing in the number of dead as the contestants fight to the death--for some of them--literally?

Veronica:

Her power taken away "indefinitely" by Haiti, she is forced to hide herself as one of the Vasari's Mani'k. Will her loyalty to the Unity remain strong enough to do what she must with the human prisoner? Or will she help Kol escape to rebel against Haiti in the only pitiful, desperate way she can? And if she aides the terran, will Kol return the sympathy or will he himself capture her?

Agent Karridan:

An Advent spy sent to the Trader worlds to discreetly scout out psionically-active humans that could be spared the destruction of the Reemergence, he hears rumors of a mysterious and deadly killer, and finds himself strangely intrigued. Sneaking into a recent crime scene, Karridan notices a faint psionic residue, and immediately stashes himself in Archie Kol's team as they hunt the murderer. The resulting explosion when he comes into contact with Zeke and Alfr'eda? A thousand suns undergoing supernova will not compare.

Professor Newman:

Working himself near to exhaustion, trying furiously to complete his project before command shuts him down, Newman is running out of time. For himself and for the TEC. Will he succeed? Welcome to the Novalith Project.

Sinners on Blogspot:

http://cisinners.blogspot.com/

 


Comments (Page 19)
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on May 31, 2009

Go ahead and publish it!

It will be a great addition to the soase universe

on May 31, 2009

Grudgningly, because it may mean cutting us off...lol... I have to also vote: Yes.

This is very good, and I'd seriously consider approaching a publisher if it were me.

on May 31, 2009

Published as in a book? I think a more likely thing would be official canonization.

on May 31, 2009

Juggernaut10
Published as in a book? I think a more likely thing would be official canonization.

all im getting from canonization is turning this book into a saint........i must say I don't follow your logic. Elaborate.

on May 31, 2009

If you were going to publish this get a Fanfiction account and post it there.These are great stories.

www.fanfiction.net

on May 31, 2009

As a first-time visitor of this thread to see what the post count is all about, what I have to say on immediate gut reaction is this:

I would have read this if the font weren't so incredibly overlarge. If it's quality, it doesn't need the emphasis.

Apologies, but I'm not a fan of being shouted at to gain my attention. That, plus some of the "teaser" statements at the end of the OP that indicate the next chapter will make me pretty much orgasm, make it difficult for me to minimize the response to the egotistical stylings and give it an honest critique. I feel like I'm being treated like a seven-year-old, and I really don't appreciate it.

Until that's corrected, a distinct NO for "publishing", whatever that means.

on May 31, 2009

Dont criticize it if u havent read it.

on May 31, 2009

theRetroboy
I feel like I'm being treated like a seven-year-old, and I really don't appreciate it.

what makes you think you're being treated as a seven year-old?

on May 31, 2009

This

Story

Is

Awsome!!!!

on Jun 01, 2009

Retroboy... grow up. You don't like a font size, so you slam the entire piece?

You don't want to be treated like a 7 year old, but you're whining like one.

Change your name to Retroman and grow up for gods sake!!!!

on Jun 01, 2009

Canthon
This

Story

Is

Awsome!!!!

  that a yes for publishing?

on Jun 03, 2009

Yes

Sin On

on Jun 03, 2009

CURRENTLY, AFTER THE NEW FORUM PERFORMANCE UPDATE, SOME BUG HAS MESSED WITH THE EDITING, AND CHAPTER 1 NOW LOOKS LIKE A VAMPIRE HAD FUN WITH A RAPID BEAR ALL OVER THE POST. (I TRIED UPDATING IT ). PLEASE BE PATIENT WHILE THE BUG IS FIXED AND I CAN CHANGE THE CHAPTER BACK TO NORMAL! THANK YOU!

sad, sad day. i think im heartbroken. Just look at what the bug did to chapter 1...\

EDIT: fixed

on Jun 04, 2009

As a first-time visitor of this thread to see what the post count is all about, what I have to say on immediate gut reaction is this:

I would have read this if the font weren't so incredibly overlarge. If it's quality, it doesn't need the emphasis.

Apologies, but I'm not a fan of being shouted at to gain my attention. That, plus some of the "teaser" statements at the end of the OP that indicate the next chapter will make me pretty much orgasm, make it difficult for me to minimize the response to the egotistical stylings and give it an honest critique. I feel like I'm being treated like a seven-year-old, and I really don't appreciate it.

Until that's corrected, a distinct NO for "publishing", whatever that means.

Retroboy

Dude, you are the only one that is complaining about the large font, really it just makes it easier to read, i mean i personally like the large font, and before you comment about the teasers or make opinions about publishing the story , read the story, and stop acting like a seven year old if you don't want to be treated like one

and guywhoyoudon'tno, i already voted for the publishing thing(it was a yes) so don't count me twice ( you could if you wanted to though...lol)

on Jun 04, 2009

Darkfall
and guywhoyoudon'tno, i already voted for the publishing thing(it was a yes) so don't count me twice ( you could if you wanted to though...lol)

haha  

 for the sweet icon

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