"Let the Lord of Chaos rule."
not-so-short story inspired from Sins of a Solar Empire
Published on November 27, 2008 By Fokxnim In Sins of a Solar Empire

Sinners

 

***Sinners has been discontinued. See last page for details.***

 

Sinners is currently (as of Febuary 15)...172 pages!

Part 2 HAS BEGUN! Here's the teaser for those of you who haven't seen it yet, or would like to be reminded of what's to come.

Part 2: Destruction

Teaser

 

 

Kol:

captured by the vicious Mani'k, can Kol escape from the Vasari before he himself is turned into one of the Vasari? And even if he can manage to escape, the Guild of Marksmen is out there, looking for him...

Archie:

Sent back to his home planet to solve a streak of murders committed by a close friend, will he join the murderer? Or will he pay the ultimate sacrifice?

Zeke:

Forever battling for control of his body, Zeke's psionic powers are growing stronger, and Alfr'eda is growing frightened. Can a Silent One rejoin the Unity? What would that mean for her? In the meantime, there are Sinners to purge. But her next target may be the most difficult and dangerous yet....The Prime Chancellor himself.

Jessica:

After the great Admiral Kol mysteriously disappears, Jessica steps up to pick up the empty seat of power. But others want the coveted Admiral position as well, and they will stop at nothing to get it. Does the "female Kol" have what it takes to reach Admiralty without the powers of a Marksman? Or will she just be a listing in the number of dead as the contestants fight to the death--for some of them--literally?

Veronica:

Her power taken away "indefinitely" by Haiti, she is forced to hide herself as one of the Vasari's Mani'k. Will her loyalty to the Unity remain strong enough to do what she must with the human prisoner? Or will she help Kol escape to rebel against Haiti in the only pitiful, desperate way she can? And if she aides the terran, will Kol return the sympathy or will he himself capture her?

Agent Karridan:

An Advent spy sent to the Trader worlds to discreetly scout out psionically-active humans that could be spared the destruction of the Reemergence, he hears rumors of a mysterious and deadly killer, and finds himself strangely intrigued. Sneaking into a recent crime scene, Karridan notices a faint psionic residue, and immediately stashes himself in Archie Kol's team as they hunt the murderer. The resulting explosion when he comes into contact with Zeke and Alfr'eda? A thousand suns undergoing supernova will not compare.

Professor Newman:

Working himself near to exhaustion, trying furiously to complete his project before command shuts him down, Newman is running out of time. For himself and for the TEC. Will he succeed? Welcome to the Novalith Project.

Sinners on Blogspot:

http://cisinners.blogspot.com/

 


Comments (Page 18)
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on May 25, 2009

Ackerman74
Could you put up a rank chart? Major to Lieutenant j.g.? kinda confusing

yeah the major/lieutenant thing is a little screwy, but i didnt see that wen i was making up the chart. o well. its the future. things have been moved around. i hav the u.s. navy ranks on here cause thats wat i used to create the other race's ranks.

U.S. NAVY RANK

 

 

 

 

 

TEC

 

 

 

 

 

ADVENT

 

 

 

 

 

VASARI

 

 

 

 

 

Seaman Recruit

 

Apprentice

 

Acolyte Recruit

 

Slave

 

Seaman Apprentice

 

Senior Apprentice

 

Acolyte

 

Grunt

 

Seaman

 

Crewman

 

Cleric

 

-----------

 

Petty Officer 3rd Class

 

Petty Officer 3rd Class

 

Minuscule Mindbattler 3rd Class

 

Slaver, 3rd Class

 

Petty Officer 2nd Class

 

Petty Officer 2nd Class

 

Minuscule Mindbattler 2nd Class

 

Slaver, 2nd Class

 

Petty Officer 1st Class

 

Petty Officer 1st Class

 

Minuscule Mindbattler 1st Class

 

Slaver, 1st Class

 

Chief Petty Officer

 

Chief Petty Officer

 

Chief Minuscule Mindbattler

 

Abdul Sentorian

 

Senior Chief Petty Officer

 

Private

 

Mindbattler

 

Minor Eliminator

 

Master Chief Petty Officer

 

Private first class

 

Senior Mindbattler

 

Senior Eliminator

 

Fleet/Command Master Chief Petty Officer

 

Corporal

 

Psiadvocate

 

Commander of the Deck

 

Warrant Officer

 

Sergeant

 

Psiwarrior

 

Invasion Specialist

 

Chief Warrant Officer 2

 

Warrant Officer

 

Senior Psiwarrior 4th Class

 

Head Bombardier, Rank 4

 

Chief Warrant Officer 3

 

Chief Warrant Officer 2

 

Senior Psiwarrior 3rd Class

 

Head Bombardier, Rank 3

 

Chief Warrant Officer 4

 

Chief Warrant Officer 3

 

Senior Psiwarrior 2nd Class

 

Head Bombardier, Rank 2

 

Chief Warrant Officer 5

 

Chief Warrant Officer 4

 

Senior Psiwarrior 1st Class

 

Head Bombardier, Rank 1

 

Ensign

 

Major

 

Manipulator

 

Eviscerate

 

Lieutenant, Junior Grade

 

Lieutenant, Junior Grade

 

Mind Controller, Junior Strength

 

Warrior of the Remnants

 

Lieutenant

 

Lieutenant

 

Mind Controller, Rank 1

 

Elite Warrior of the Remnants

 

Lieutenant Commander

 

Lieutenant Commander

 

Advanced Mind Controller

 

Tactician of the Fleet

 

Commander

 

Commander

 

Crusader

 

Sightblinder

 

Captain

 

Captain

 

Crusader of Truth

 

Captain

 

Rear Admiral, Lower Half (Commodore)

 

Commodore

 

Senior Crusader of the Unity

 

Coarse General

 

Rear Admiral, Upper Half

 

Rear Admiral of the Fleet

 

Fleet Master

 

High Captain

 

Vice Admiral

 

Vice Admiral

 

Fleet Premier

 

General

 

Admiral Chief of Naval Operations/ Commandant of the Coast Guard

 

Admiral

 

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Elite Subjugator

 

Fleet Admiral

 

Admiral Chief of Spacial Operations

 

Coalescence

 

Fleet Admiral Commander

 

u gotta giv the credit where its due: http://www.militaryfactory.com/ranks/navy_ranks.asp

on May 27, 2009

Great. Thank you for writing this

on May 29, 2009

part 2 teaser is done.

on May 29, 2009

Thanks. Seriously dude, this story is epic. Try to get it published, and here are the terms. To have it published, if the Ironclad people will even let you, you would have toget rid of the story on this website. I know that sucks, but it would be the only way. Did I mention it was epic

on May 29, 2009

Woah, I just read this for the first time...

I'm impressed... this is getting really good!

 

Sssssssinners....."

on May 30, 2009

just_jim
Woah, I just read this for the first time...

I'm impressed... this is getting really good!

 

Sssssssinners....."

  That's one on my utmost favorite parts. Chapter 2, part 2 if I remember right?

on May 30, 2009

HiddenMaster
Thanks. Seriously dude, this story is epic. Try to get it published, and here are the terms. To have it published, if the Ironclad people will even let you, you would have toget rid of the story on this website. I know that sucks, but it would be the only way. Did I mention it was epic

woops seems i skipped reading this before. yeah, thats also a thing. but im writing another story, so i hav been researching the publishing process, and if i got this published here's how it would hav to go.

first of all, get ironclad's permission for publishing. second, remove this story from impulse (probably hav to get a moderator for that, since posts that are deleted can still be found, just not edited). third, contact an agent and send a query letter for this story. big if if my letter intrigues them. if it does, then i send a couple chapters or the whole thing. and the publishing process MAYBE starts to get started.

but before that all, i would have to complete the story. no agents interested in a half-completed fiction story. so maybe if we contacted ironclad on the idea of getting this published and they agreed, i would just stop adding to this and complete it at home (without all ur great suggestions!     ). thats actually something worth looking into.

on May 30, 2009

OK EVERYONE LISTEN UP! I am going to contact Ironclad with the intention of getting their permission to get this published, but I need all your support! Show Ironclad (and my future agent, hopefully) how popular this novel would be by saying so! Please don't comment more than once, but everyone show their favor for getting this published! (or their favor in not getting it published).

Tell your friends to tell your friends and everyone vote! Lets see how many votes we can accumulate!

on May 30, 2009

GET PUBLISHED MAN!!!

on May 30, 2009

Yea!

I don't think it'll work though. Sorry to be a nay-sayer (lol).

on May 30, 2009

GET IT PUBLISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DarkFallφ

 

on May 30, 2009

Juggernaut10
Yea!

I don't think it'll work though. Sorry to be a nay-sayer (lol).

y not?

on May 31, 2009

I don't know, it's just not something corporations do. Stardock seems to be a little oblivious of lore.

on May 31, 2009

Juggernaut10
I don't know, it's just not something corporations do. Stardock seems to be a little oblivious of lore.

that is true. But there's always the chance. I'll ask Ironclad once summer breaks over, and I'm back at my house.

on May 31, 2009

yea publish it

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