"Let the Lord of Chaos rule."
not-so-short story inspired from Sins of a Solar Empire
Published on November 27, 2008 By Fokxnim In Sins of a Solar Empire

Sinners

 

***Sinners has been discontinued. See last page for details.***

 

Sinners is currently (as of Febuary 15)...172 pages!

Part 2 HAS BEGUN! Here's the teaser for those of you who haven't seen it yet, or would like to be reminded of what's to come.

Part 2: Destruction

Teaser

 

 

Kol:

captured by the vicious Mani'k, can Kol escape from the Vasari before he himself is turned into one of the Vasari? And even if he can manage to escape, the Guild of Marksmen is out there, looking for him...

Archie:

Sent back to his home planet to solve a streak of murders committed by a close friend, will he join the murderer? Or will he pay the ultimate sacrifice?

Zeke:

Forever battling for control of his body, Zeke's psionic powers are growing stronger, and Alfr'eda is growing frightened. Can a Silent One rejoin the Unity? What would that mean for her? In the meantime, there are Sinners to purge. But her next target may be the most difficult and dangerous yet....The Prime Chancellor himself.

Jessica:

After the great Admiral Kol mysteriously disappears, Jessica steps up to pick up the empty seat of power. But others want the coveted Admiral position as well, and they will stop at nothing to get it. Does the "female Kol" have what it takes to reach Admiralty without the powers of a Marksman? Or will she just be a listing in the number of dead as the contestants fight to the death--for some of them--literally?

Veronica:

Her power taken away "indefinitely" by Haiti, she is forced to hide herself as one of the Vasari's Mani'k. Will her loyalty to the Unity remain strong enough to do what she must with the human prisoner? Or will she help Kol escape to rebel against Haiti in the only pitiful, desperate way she can? And if she aides the terran, will Kol return the sympathy or will he himself capture her?

Agent Karridan:

An Advent spy sent to the Trader worlds to discreetly scout out psionically-active humans that could be spared the destruction of the Reemergence, he hears rumors of a mysterious and deadly killer, and finds himself strangely intrigued. Sneaking into a recent crime scene, Karridan notices a faint psionic residue, and immediately stashes himself in Archie Kol's team as they hunt the murderer. The resulting explosion when he comes into contact with Zeke and Alfr'eda? A thousand suns undergoing supernova will not compare.

Professor Newman:

Working himself near to exhaustion, trying furiously to complete his project before command shuts him down, Newman is running out of time. For himself and for the TEC. Will he succeed? Welcome to the Novalith Project.

Sinners on Blogspot:

http://cisinners.blogspot.com/

 


Comments (Page 35)
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on Nov 28, 2009

I don't see much of Professor Newman lol. Do you have anything on him?

on Nov 28, 2009

Oh he's all the way at the end of part 2. At least for now that's his planned introduction point. Unless anything changes, he'll be a major character in the climax ending leading onto part 3

on Nov 29, 2009

excellent. it was really good. two questions though. what was with the bit about the cavern? and how come th boy wasnt frozen with the rest of the crew?

on Nov 29, 2009

eoncommander
excellent. it was really good. two questions though. what was with the bit about the cavern? and how come th boy wasnt frozen with the rest of the crew?

The cavern - a little haha! moment to the reader, where they know the advent's powers but the character doesn't.

The boy - we don't know. maybe just an oversight. maybe not. only time will tell.

on Nov 29, 2009

Ok! I'm starting a blog promotion campaign. If you start following the Sins blog (link at top) in the next 48 hours, your username will most likely appear in Sinners somewhere! (as a character, company, or capital ship, depending on your name). So act now! Start following the Sins blog and become part of the story!

(also, only 3 days left until the Sinners picture poll closes! check the blog for more details)

EDIT: and when I said 3 days, its actually only 2. hurry hurry!

on Nov 29, 2009

The cavern - a little haha! moment to the reader, where they know the advent's powers but the character doesn't.

yea, but i didnt get it. maybe i'm just being an idiot, but could you please explain?

edit: i got the part about surprise, so i understood what you were trying to do, but i didnt get it here

on Nov 29, 2009

[quote who="C.I." reply="515" id="2459339"]Ok! I'm starting a blog promotion campaign. If you start following the Sins blog (link at top) in the next 48 hours, your username will most likely appear in Sinners somewhere! (as a character, company, or capital ship, depending on your name). So act now! Start following the Sins blog and become part of the story!

(also, only 3 days left until the Sinners picture poll closes! check the blog for more details)

EDIT: and when I said 3 days, its actually only 2. hurry hurry!
[/quote]

how bout a title? cause thats kind of what i envisioned when i made my name. you know, emperor of the universe, lord of all domains, the eon commander, etc.

don't listen to me though, do whatever you want to do with it. might be cool as a ship name

on Nov 29, 2009

Commander Eon of one of the many rebel forces against the TEC?

EDIT: but u hav to start following my blog first! That's the only rule. The links up at the top, but I'll put it here again.

http://cisinners.blogspot.com/

on Nov 29, 2009

Cool blog! (a character for me please!)

(for the TEC not against it)

on Nov 29, 2009

following

on Nov 29, 2009

i did that before i posted

on Nov 30, 2009

Are you sure its the Sinners blog, not this thread? I hav two people currently following the Sinners blog. CrusaderScott and a man with a name starting with Cesar (guessing its a different name than their forum username). I've already sent a message to him. But if you say you're following the blog and you are not Crusader or Cesar, then something didn't work.

Again, here's the Sinners blog link: http://cisinners.blogspot.com

on Nov 30, 2009

If you look to the top under the title Sinners on Blogspot, you'll see I started a list of those who are following and becoming part of the story. Make sure if you follow that you're checking the public box! Doesn't help me if you're privately following, I can't tell that.

on Nov 30, 2009

i think thats what i did, actually. i'll go fix that

on Dec 01, 2009

Eon, I assume your matthew?

I posted a thing on the blog, but I want to say it here too. If you decide to follow my blog, please send me a message through either the blog or the forums (private messages work) telling me the name you are following under and your username on the forums. Just so I know who to award! Thanks all for the support.

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