Space Ponies!!!!

i thought arcie was dead...

nope. whered u get that from? the last time he was here he had a dream where he shot Haiti in the head. it was a dream, tho. and nothing happened to archie in it anyway.

wait didn't archie really die but the jackel took his name?

No  that was Alexander J Kol

pg5:Chapter 7, part 1:Identity

...how come when he first signed up he signed archie kol

look at chp. 5 part 2 it clearly says Archie Kol

look at chapter 5 part 2 it clearly says archie kol

oops sorry about that

Pg 5 Chapter 7 part 1

I'm now confused, at first i thought it could be archies father(it mentions him haveing an admiral for a father pg 4 chapter 5 part 2) but that doesn't make sense either because the tag says crewman, if it was his father it would say admiral, you may be right, the writer my have goofed somewhere( no offense i love your story and i can't wait to read more)

-CorKnight

pg 4 chapter 5 part 2

This story is taking place at different times at different points. For instance, Kol is 8 years before the game, Archie is about 4 years, and the advent are about present or 5 years, depending on who he's talking about. Right, guywhoyoudontno?

Yes i know, what we want to know is did the jackel take the place of Archie kol or was it Alexander Kol( archies father maybe) when he got injured and loss his memory during the fire and if archie is really dead ( if the jackel "replaced him") or not

exactly. im planning to put the present at the point where the advent join the war, and then time will be spaced out in A.I.'s (after invasion).

archie is kol's son, the real one, but the world thinks the jackal is kol so wen the jackal becomes admiral, they associate that with archie's father. but they dont hav a good father-son relationship. Alexander Kol died in the fire, the jackal replaced him, and Alexander's small child has grown up and become archie. i no that doesnt fit well with the opening scene in sins, where the advent join the war at the point where kol's son is still a toddler, but im allowed a little creativeness, right? things will get less confusing once everything comes to the present.

sorry for all the confusion. you have to pay attention to the time and place at the beginning of each part, and sometimes in between parts as well. they should be italized. that'll tell you what time period in the war it is, and give you a general idea of who they would be talking about.

edit

Hey guywhoyoudontno, I've got an idea for the next part of the Kol thing, right? Well, I was thinking about the weapon Kol has on his fighter, and I think it could be a burrowing missle. Imagine this. It is meant to attach itself to a ship once the shields are down, and using a drill would start burrowing itself into the ship, and when it reaches a certain point, it explodes. I doudt this would kill a capital ship, so you could make it breach the antimatter storage and cause a massive explosion, damaging other ships around it and giving the TEC a chance to defeat the fleet. The capital ship could be a flagship, and with their leader fallen, the vassari would be disorganized for a time and would lose some moral. Just a thought.Tell me if you like it

thanks for explaining